Well here it goes, I'm on the ice.
Woah woah waa! Oh well, fell over, big deal.
Okay now I'm skating! My blades are cutting through the ice like knives. better not get carried away though
All right I'm gonna jump, crack! Oops left a dent in the ice. Okay I'm gonna try a twirl on one foot. Swoosh! Yay! it worked, and I didn't fall over! I zoomed around the ice like a race car. Oh! Time for lunch.
I am a student at goldfields primary.This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. please note....some work won't be edited- just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 12 June 2018
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So proud of you little sister and love the sound expreasions in your story 💗✌😁
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ReplyDeleteYou have a great style of writing! Awesome post Michelle ♥️
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